Monday, June 1, 2009

Introduction to Piece Three

In this piece I discussed the importance of the gym community. I think I did well in directing this to an audience that is either apprehensive about joining a gym, or is stereotyping the people in gyms as being conceited and arrogant. I think that with this audience in mind, I was able to relieve the fears of those anxious about joining a gym because I described the gym as being supportive and helpful. I think I was able to disprove those who thought the people at the gym are arrogant and competitive because I described that the people who go to the gym are kind to others and are more concerned with themselves being healthy than showing up someone else. I showed that I am strong because I am a part of the gym community, but in the end, I am only strong for myself and no one else.

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